Talk:Story

The story up to this point is not straight-up dawg, not dawg at all - the Dudebro does not get enough character-moments, you're not building him up in a good way (you're just imaging that the reader/listener of the story already has a predefined image of DudeBro - well, we should make it clear, that the predefined image is wrong. Always.

DudeBro is the awesomeness in person, It's like Mr. T got shoved into Chuck Norris - and that is the way he is supposed to be presented! All I can see from here, is some angry Dude who is resentless and all, but not superior to anyone at all (except this gay Fem-Guy). But that is exactly what he should be: A tough, never-resting killing-machine, born to fuck bad people up (or good ones, for that matter - he just does not care!). The only advice you can give anyone handling this guy: Stay the fuck away from him.

And then there is somebody who messes with his family: His former BroTeam (which was put together by DudeBro himself in order to obtain world dominance - or peace, how he would call it) got assaulted by some nasty guys and where killed all over (DudeBro, at that time, were in a 10-way at this bitch-party). DudeBro messed with this company once, eg. aperture sience (since I love Portal, I would love to see this reference :) ), and now theyre after him and all. Well... they were after him, the page just turned - and DudeBro is so going to fuck them right in the ass! In order to fuck those people he has to travel around the world, going into some pretty nasty complexes, fighting through jungles, and stuff. The story then emerges: He finds the first guy, and then goes all the way up to the top of the pyramide.

Imagine, the straightest Dawg around takes orders from some military bitch? Not on my watch, he won't. Why should he even bother helping those guys?

[[User:Recursive|Recursive 12:42, May 17, 2010 (UTC) ]]